CREATIVE WRITING

The Perfect Gift


Stevano Feen, a 19 year-old boy. He was not clever student in Oak College and had a lot a friend because Stevano was very friendly, humble and care. He had a war with his little brother but is was sometime when he made Stevano angry.
He had a fuzzy mother and he did not like it when his mother talked too much, so everybody became a good listener and made bored but she was very care with his family. His father very bussy to work but always had a time to talked and shared with his family and care too.
Mother asked to Stevano ti accompanied his little brother when she went to Uncle’s house.”Are you kidding…..?”said Stevano. ”what do you mean honey, mom just asked you to accompany him?”said mother.”Phew, that’s OK” he answered.
Cliff did something sily that made Stevano shamed because he danced with sang in front of their home .So many children came in the garden to saw him. Stevano opened the door and pulled Cliff’s hair to came in their home and all children get out with laughed. He thought his little brother did something crazy.
“Are you crazy, ”said Stevano. Cliff smiled to him and said “No just joke honey.”And then he hid under a big table with laughed.” You say….honey, where do you get the word from, sily?”said Stevano extremely angry. He was impatient to threw him in to the trash bin but it just his imagination because Cliff very naughty and made him shamed. Cliff appeared from the big table and said if he just imitated from their mother.
In the morning, he went to the campus and in the bus he met Niara then she sat next to him.She was beautiful girl. it was made Stevano curious to knew her.”Are you Niara?”said Stevano.She did not answered it and run away. He smiled with curious.

Second day,they met in the bus.He tried to talked with her but suddenly she said,”yes,I am. How do you know?” He said in his heart if he love her in the first sight so he saved her name in his heart.”Hallo…”said Niara. After that he woke up from his imagination.He shocked and answered “I love you Niara.” She smiled to him and run away.
Next day, they met in the bus again and she sat next to him.”Niara do you remember my question?”asked Stevano. ”yes, I want….” answered Niara. in fact, they was love in the first sight too but shamed to shared it.
He told his mother if he had a girlfriend but she disagree.”You are child, honey” said mother. Then mother talked too much until he forgot all that she said to him. Perhaps mother just gave him advice.”No, I am not child again, your children are grown up now,” said Stevano. After that he went to bed.
Suddenly, Niara came to her boyfriend home with brought some cakes. When Stevano’s mother opened the door after Niara knocked it then mother looked curious with the girl and then asked to her, ”Are you Steve girlfriend?” She was surprised then said “yes”. What she knew it but she just asked to her heart. ”I know you from Stev and he tells all about you” said mother.It was strange time to Niara because mother very fussy. Every time she talked too much about all so it made Niara bored.
Mother said, ”you very child to know about love to get relation with him,honey.You must concentration to your lecture not relation maybe it could make you distrac.” She was sad when heard it.She wanted to mom stopped it and heared her reason but she could not. Niara felt bored and uncomfortable so she put the cakes on the table and then asked to Stevano mother if she wanted to back home althought they have not met yet.
Stevano get a message from his girlfriend. If she wanted to broke up with her and said many reasons.After that he came to his mother ”Mom, what do you say to Niara?”asked Stevano. ”Honey,what do you say.i do not understand,” said mother.”I broke up with Niara, ”he said.His mother gave many reasons why she did like that until they had a war. He did not say anything and run away from his home.
When he walked and then met a girl that sat in the garden town after that he came to her.They talked too much and she told if her parents was divorce. Her parents did not care with her again. They gave her much money but she thought it was enough to bought her happiness and she needed a care and protect from her parents only.
Stevano realized that his mother was care with him and nobody could get it.He went home and then apologized to his mother about what he did.He knew his family was the perfect gift from God to him and he was very love them.

THE END


Written by : YENY. S